Thursday 31 October 2024

Notebook One: Cerebus #27 Part Two

A few years ago I scanned all of Dave Sim's notebooks. He had filled 36 notebooks during the years he created the monthly Cerebus series, covering issues #20 to 300, plus the other side items -- like the Epic stories, posters and prints, convention speeches etc. A total of 3,281 notebook pages detailing his creative process. I never really got the time to study the notebooks when I had them. Just did a quick look, scanned them in and sent them back to Dave as soon as possible. So this regular column is a chance for me to look through those scans and highlight some of the more interesting pages.

Maybe instead of rewriting this opener every week, I’ll be a bit more efficient with my use of time and have this standard opening . . .though Boss Man saying I'm giving the notebook away for free, I see it as a way of advertising all the good stuff in the notebook, and wouldn't it be easier to have a hard copy to flip through and read at your own leisure? 

Have you got your copy of Albatross One? That is Dave Sim’s name for his first notebook used in the creation of Cerebus. If you want a copy of the notebook – and trust me, as someone who has held the actual Albatross One, it is a pretty close duplicate and looks great – you can check out this post right here. Well not this post. The one at this link. Go check it out, this post will still be here.

Please buy one so boss man stops yelling at me for "giving the store away for free". Perhaps if he sells one or two or all that he has left, he'll finally give me some PTO. Wait, why am I pushing this, boss man is on vacation. . .I should just take off. . .

And if you don’t want to buy one, you can wait as I release a couple of pages a week and check them out using the Notebook One tag. But trust me, the notebook is much much nicer then my silly little posts.

Okay, now that is done, on with this week’s Notebook One post.

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Yes, we’re still looking at Dave Sim’s first Cerebus notebook, Albatross One.  Why did I start this chronological look at Albatross One? I started because there were questions about the notebook in a Please Hold For Dave Sim video according to a post from last December, Albatross One - AKA Dave's First Cerebus Notebook which covers Cerebus #20 through #28, plus a few other bits and pieces. So now that we’ve been looking at Albatross One for almost a year, what have we seen? Here is the page count so far:

Notebook One, page count breakdown as of 27 Oct 24

And Manly Matt keeps asking “And she's gotta be nearing the end, right? Right?”. Yahhhh, about that. There are 194 pages scanned out of this 200 page notebook, and we’ve seen 153 of them so far. We have 41 pages to go on this journey. I don’t think we’ll finish by the end of 2024, but soon thereafter. So should we pick up where we left off?

We left off last week with page #154 and material for Cerebus #27. And that is right back where page #155 picks up. Yes, that big bird looking like thing is supposed to be The Albatross. This page gives information about the Albatross that wasn’t used – that the Albatross is a scared symbol of the Eye in the Pyramid group and used for ransom. It is released from a safe at the Regency and floated down the river in a small boat which is then picked up by the kidnappers. Some Cirinists kill the kidnappers and take the Albatross to a Cirinist church in Doveshire. Lord Julius has an agent in one of the Priestesses of this Cirinist Church and she brings it to him. 

Notebook 1, page 155

However, Dave mentions in the AV version of High Society that “it isn’t the real Albatross. The idea is that Cirinists and Kevillists embark on a ‘Mad, Mad, Mad World’ style rugby game with it, decimating their own ranks.” This plot of the Cirinists and Lord Julius vying for this Albatross was never seen in the finished comic, but it continues on in the next notebook page.

Notebook 1, page 156

Dave said this about the above page: “’Lord Julius accomplishes what he set out to do: get some major Cirinists and Orthodox Tarimites bumped off.’ The rest of the page is still plotting Cerebus getting the Albatross – but NOT knowing what it is – and the kidnappers getting murdered. I moved all of that COMPLETELY behind the scenes so that Cerebus would have this exponential rise in his perceived significance while he wouldn’t have any idea why all of the ‘major Cirinists and Orthodox Tarimites’ were getting ‘bumped off.’” 

That sketch of the odd looking guy with the big ears is another version of what Cerebus looks like according to some artist. We saw another take of Cerebus similar to this on page 139 of the notebook.

The next page of the notebook continues this same unseen plot of the Albatross as ransom:

Notebook 1, page 157

With all of this plotting, perhaps some Cerebus fan out there could take it and turn it into the Untold Tales of Estarcion. Reminiscent of Jaka’s Story, Cerebus wouldn’t be the main character – if he would appear at all. But what is happening in the world around him unbeknownst to him. 

Anyone? 

Wednesday 30 October 2024

Mail Call Part 1

Benjamin Hobbs:

"Manly" Matt Dow sent me a package in the mail.  It contained several items which he had intended to send me long before now but hadn't because, as he put it, "mailing things is my kryptonite." 

The first items are these awards, noting that I am the winner.  You may be wondering what I won. I know I'm wondering that. One award is from 2019 and the other is undated.  I don't remember winning any awards.  If Matt remembers what these are for, I sure hope he lets us all know!

He also sent his suggestion for the bookplate for the first CIH? Hardcover Kickstarter campaign which ran WAAAAY back in 2021.

Thanks for the mail Matt!

Next Week: More mail!

Tuesday 29 October 2024

SDoAR 2.43: New Dave Sim SDOAR Art -- and Our Cerebus Raffle!

Dave sent Manly me a fax that seems appropriate to run since today is A Moment of The Strange Death of Alex Raymond. Dave, take it away!

Or perhaps it was in the end credits of season 2? Maybe? Just a hunch?
Anyhoo, Dave how about 2e?

So the original page...

And the new artwork!

The raffle is still ongoing, but only 11 entries so far for Cerebus/TMNT cards #87 and 88, Comics Journal no. 66 with Cerebus Six Deadly Sin ad within and ...

...Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles #8, The T8 Ashcan Preview book with wraparound Green Foil cover (limited to 120 copies) and ...
... Cerebus #16, 17, 18, 19, 20 and Gold #0.
All that can be yours for only $25 per raffle ticket!

Rules to win the October Raffle and Help Out SDoAR

Entries (or our equivalent of raffle tickets) cost $25 each and can be donated via lump sum to the Strange Death of Alex Raymond 2024 GoFundMe campaign through Monday, November 11, 2024 at midnight, PST.

I will then randomly assign numbers to each entry and have Dave pull one more Karnak, and I'll announce the winner on November 12, 2024.

Just the GoFundMe Facts, Ma'am

  • $15,402.00 raised to date from 263 donations
  • 81 new pages released as mocked up by Dave Sim from 11 June to 27 December 2021
  • 102 total pages available on Dropbox, including Dave's 2019 mocked-up pages
  • $198.00 away from unlocking page 103
  • If you have not donated > $5+ donation grants access to all 102 pages and all pages moving forward
  • If you have donated, thank you, but if you want to donate monthly, GoFundMe does not offer that option, so please do so as we are at the end of month #10 of Year 2.

The Strange Death of Alex Raymond Preview, Part 42

The following are links to previous updates that featured pages from The Strange Death of Alex Raymond hardcover. If you click on the links in order, you can begin to devour the magnum opus that is the Strange Death of Alex Raymond...

This
Thisthis
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Thisthisthisthisthis
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This, this, then...
Ciao!

Jen xx
SDOAR GoFundMe -->> https://www.gofundme.com/f/sdoar-2023 <<-- SDOAR GoFundMe

Monday 28 October 2024

I dunno what it is, I'm foggy on where it came from, and it's not mine anyway...

Hi, Everybody!

IN FIFTY-ONE (51) HOURS, the LEGENDS OF INDIE COMICS: WORDS ONLY Kickstarter, featuring a new Cerebus story by Dave, ends. Back now, or forever wonder what the story is (unless I run it here. I might, it's possible.) latest update from the campaign:
SOUTHERN KNIGHTS...ACHIEVED! Thanks to all you backers out there, we've met our second stretch goal for the LEGENDS OF INDIE COMICS: WORDS ONLY campaign! That means--boo-yah!--we WILL have a brand-new SOUTHERN KNIGHTS story in the book, written by the Knights' creator,Henry Vogel! Can this book GET any more exciting? YES, actually! When we hit the third stretch goal at $9,000, we will have the funding to add a black-and-white illustration for each story! That goal is DEFINITELY in reach, but we need YOUR help to hit it! Please jump in and back the project...or add another reward if you've already backed it! And remember, we only have 2 DAYS LEFT to reach that goal! I KNOW, working together, we can make it happen! Here's the link: http://kck.st/3Y11ZHu
Dave has said he designed the spread to go with his story, so if they get the $749 they need...

Anyway, Mondays!
And if you're new here, and don't understand this wall of text, lemme get you "hip":

You're welcome Past-Dave! Always happy to be of service. 

Any anyway, if you wanna go back to the beginning, I did a round-up of the first twenty-seven here. Then click the Monday link and all 169 or so of them will show up last first. (If you wanna have fun with it, count and see how many of those posts also have six "sotto voce" pages from Cerebus in them...)

Any, any, anyway, Spatula got this:
Yag-Kosha made a bad deal.

"What is it?"
Fogo Fino...
Larry got it from Steve Hendricks.
"Who the fug is Steve Hendricks?"
You mean you don't know who Steve Hendricks is?!? And you call yourself a Cerebus fan?
...
Yeah, I don't know who he is either... I guess he was big in the Fandom before my time. Used to run the Fan Club. Probably knows Gerhard's last name. (I mean I know it, but that's because I'ma one of the "Inside People"
You could be an Inside People too. I can get you "in" for relatively cheap...)

Dave and I will be doing Please Hold For Dave Sim in nine days on November 7th. Get your questions in to momentofcerebus@gmail.com. (Yes, I'ma ask what the fug this is...)

Rigamarole:
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October 28.*
*Sale dates are not final and therefore subject to change.
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The Cerebus Humble Bundle is over, you can STILL get all 16 volumes for $99CANADIAN at CerebusDownloads.com (More if you want the Remastered Cerebus Guide to Self-Publishing...)
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Heritage has slapped copies of #1 and #2.
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The Help Out Bill Messner-Loebs Go Fund Me, or buy Rodney Schroeter's book with proceeds going to Bill. 
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The Last Day Without nothing.
   "      "     "        "  Dave's signature.
   "      "     "        "  an Old Cerebus Remarque
   "      "     "     Auction catalog for the Panoramic Remarques
If you need a "THE LAST DAY" spine sticker to cover up "FORM & VOID" momentofcerebus@gmail.com
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Oliver' Simonsen's Cerebus movie: The Absurd, Surreal, Metaphysical, and Fractured Destiny of Cerebus the Aardvark it's currently available on "Plex", "Xumo", "Vimeo On Demand", "Tubi". If you're in Brazil..."Mometu", "Nuclear Home Video".
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Next Time: Jen! SDOAR! Not me! (You're welcome.)

Sunday 27 October 2024

Cerebus Trading Cards (no, not the checklist.)

Hi, Everybody!

IN THREE (3) DAYS, the LEGENDS OF INDIE COMICS: WORDS ONLY Kickstarter, featuring a new Cerebus story by Dave, ends. Back now, or forever wonder what the story is (unless I run it here. I might, it's possible.) latest update from the campaign:
DYNAMO JOE IN THE STRETCH! Comics' favorite giant mecha battlesuit will return in a brand-new prose fiction story by his creator, Doug Rice...when the LEGENDS OF INDIE COMICS: WORDS ONLY Kickstarter project hits its first stretch goal (at $6,000)! This thrilling new adventure will also feature Joe's humanoid/feline mechanic, the wild and woolly Pomru Purrwakkawakka! Let's make this a reality, because there has never been a better time for Dynamo Joe to burst back onto the scene! Whether you're a longtime fan or just now discovering Joe, you're going to LOVE this action-packed tale! Go here to help make it happen: http://kck.st/3Y11ZHu

And remember, there is less than a week to back this project, pump up this book with super stretch goals, and score a copy to hold in your hot little hands!
and the previous update:

BIG NEWS, EVERYONE! Thanks to a price drop, you can get the SECRETS OF INDIE COMICS ALL-STAR COURSE for just $150! What a great way to support the LEGENDS OF INDIE COMICS: WORDS ONLY campaign...and learn from a team of superstar creators in the bargain!

In this incredible course, you will learn the secrets of publishing indie comics from Mike Baron (The Badger), Donna Barr (The Desert Peach), Bob Burden (Flaming Carrot), Michael T. Gilbert (Mr. Monster), Steven Grant (Whisper), Mike Grell (Jon Sable, Freelance), Javier Hernandez (El Muerto), Justin Jordan (Luther Strode), Donald Simpson (Megaton Man), Joe Staton (Michael Mauser), and Mark Verheiden (The American).

This course will be a blast, and now you can get it for the best price ever! 

Thank you for your interest and support of the LEGENDS project! Together, we will make history, bringing together these classic characters and superstar creators in one volume of thrilling fiction for the first time ever! 
They asked Dave to participate, and he said he only really answers questions on Please Hold For Dave Sim. (Limit 3 per questioner) WHICH, he and I will be recording in ten days on November 7th. Get your questions in to momentofcerebus@gmail.com
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Over on the Cerebus Facebook group, Richard Evans asked:
Hi Gang! Is anyone interested in selling or trading some Cerebus cards? See below for swap and want list and let me know!

I said I'd look in the box of Waverly Press stuff (that my wife has been asking when I was gonna move out of the kitchenette area of the apartment for the past few months...)

So, I have this:

Specifically, I  have:
1-25, 27-33, 56, 61, 71(x8), 87(x3), 88(x3), 176-191, 201-216, 232(x8)
10-21, 24, 25, 28, 29, 30
11,
215 a lot
 A whole assload of these. It's my card, and they sent me a couple hundred of them (I think...)
7 sets of the Vark Wars cards Hobbs produced for his Kickstarters
I'll sign the cards I was involved in the creation of. Legally, I had nothing to do with Baby Yoda Cerebus...that's my story and I'm sticking to it... 
72-81
These probably are supposed to go with the copy of Form & Void that Travis owes me for, but as it's been a few years, I'm thinking he doesn't get to whine if I get rid of them...  
73-81
301 (a bunch, all signed by Dave.)
So, Rich gets first "dibs", but after he looks through the stack, anybody else who needs cards can make a claim. I'm missing:
89, 93, 217-223, 233,
And I'm pretty sure 235 is the last card if you don't count the Jeff Seiler #301 card as part of the set.

I'm selling the #215 card for:
$5 signed
$10 unsigned
$15 Signed and Sketched (it's a visual if you haven't seen one.)

I also have a bunch of the sketch cards (there's three or four different versions) I'll sell 'em sketched for $20 (I usually color them and make 'em look all nice (with the same three gags. (Why mess with perfection?)) But if you want them blank, I can do that too.

And if anybody needs any of the Waverly Press miscellany (stickers, postcards, buttons, pins, etc.) my wife will let you have it for postage. (I ask for a couple of bucks for the trouble...) I've offered the contents a few times, but have never made a list. MAYBE I'll do a "What's in the Box!?!" video showing all the crap...NEAT STUFF I need to clear out before the wife gets crazy and throws it all away (she's like a 50s mother. "That trash is rotting your brain!". Seriously.)

Anyway, interested parties, the email is still momentofcerebus@gmail.com
Rigamarole:
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October 27-28.*
*Sale dates are not final and therefore subject to change.
_______________
The Cerebus Humble Bundle is over, you can STILL get all 16 volumes for $99CANADIAN at CerebusDownloads.com (More if you want the Remastered Cerebus Guide to Self-Publishing...)
_______________
Heritage has slapped copies of #1 and #2.
_______________
The Help Out Bill Messner-Loebs Go Fund Me, or buy Rodney Schroeter's book with proceeds going to Bill. 
_______________
The Last Day Without nothing.
   "      "     "        "  Dave's signature.
   "      "     "        "  an Old Cerebus Remarque
   "      "     "     Auction catalog for the Panoramic Remarques
If you need a "THE LAST DAY" spine sticker to cover up "FORM & VOID" momentofcerebus@gmail.com
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Oliver' Simonsen's Cerebus movie: The Absurd, Surreal, Metaphysical, and Fractured Destiny of Cerebus the Aardvark it's currently available on "Plex", "Xumo", "Vimeo On Demand", "Tubi". If you're in Brazil..."Mometu", "Nuclear Home Video".
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Next Time: Mondays!

Saturday 26 October 2024

On Wally Wood. And other things

Hi, Everybody!

The AMOC Fax Machine has been earning it's keep:

And then:


Christon's rough:

Then I sent Dave:
Dave,
This came across the transom:
On WALLACE WOOD

I got out of the Army in spring of ’71, and my high school buddy Ralph Reese invited me to join him in his home studio to help him on penciling jobs for NatLamp, Esquire, and B&W horror mags. There wasn’t a huge amount of work available, so Ralph put me in contact with Wallace Wood, as a possible assistant. I met with Woody (nobody who actually knew him called him anything else, because he HATED being called “Wally.” (his first wife Tatjana always addressed him as “Wallace.”) We hit it off right away, and he took me on as his background guy, Zip-cutter, swipe-o-grapher, morgue-keeper, and (literally) bottle-washer*.

Once settled in, Woody proceeded to teach me to letter, using the Gaspar Saladino alphabet. He said if he couldn’t teach me to letter, he couldn’t teach me any of the other skills. It was all about control of the tool. Crisp verticals, and horizontals, visually pleasing circles- all at a microscopic Italic angle, sprightly positioned within the Ames Guide pencil lines. This tool control was the basis for teaching me inking.

Inking was done with Gillotte 190 pen points (no longer available) and Winsor Newton Series Seven Russian Red Sable watercolor brushes. (They were a buck and a quarter at the time, and I shudder to think what they fetch today) His fave was the #3. He would “Chevy” the brushes, to modify them for specific tasks. He needed a slightly blunter tip for “outlining” and that was accomplished by wetting and pointing the new brush, and slowly bringing the tip close to a freshly extinguished paper match. This would burn off that annoying little hair at the end, and blunt the point so that it produced a thicker line. A more judicious approach to the ember created a “feathering” brush which was used to “feather out” from solid blacks. Speedball lettering pen points were ground down to specs on a hone stone.

As I took on more assistant tasks, Woody sat me down and told me “the Parable of the Old Cartoonist and the Elves.”

“Once upon a time there was a little old cartoonist who was up against a frightful deadline, but could no longer stay awake to finish the job that was due the next morning. As he slept at the drawing table, the Elves came into the studio and feeling sorry for the old cartoonist, they each grabbed brushes and pens and proceeded to finish inking the whole job. When the old cartoonist awoke to see the finished pages, he exclaimed, “Omigod, these really SUCK!” It was a mishmash of hairy tiny lines that didn’t mean anything, and the spotting of blacks was haphazard, and the overall look was ugly.”

I got the message.

Larry Hama, August 11, 2024
Dave responded by sending me this:

Which let's me bring up one of, if not THEE most popular post in AMOC history:
Wally Wood's 22 Panels That Always Work!!
Wally Wood's 22 Panels That Always Work!!
by Wallace Wood
(Click image to enlarge)


Rigamarole:
_______________
October 26-28.*
*Sale dates are not final and therefore subject to change.
_______________
The Cerebus Humble Bundle is over, you can STILL get all 16 volumes for $99CANADIAN at CerebusDownloads.com (More if you want the Remastered Cerebus Guide to Self-Publishing...)
_______________
Heritage has slapped copies of #1 and #2.
_______________
The Help Out Bill Messner-Loebs Go Fund Me, or buy Rodney Schroeter's book with proceeds going to Bill. 
_______________
The Last Day Without nothing.
   "      "     "        "  Dave's signature.
   "      "     "        "  an Old Cerebus Remarque
   "      "     "     Auction catalog for the Panoramic Remarques
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Oliver' Simonsen's Cerebus movie: The Absurd, Surreal, Metaphysical, and Fractured Destiny of Cerebus the Aardvark it's currently available on "Plex", "Xumo", "Vimeo On Demand", "Tubi". If you're in Brazil..."Mometu", "Nuclear Home Video".
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Next Time: Nothing about Wally Wood, I tell ya what...

Friday 25 October 2024

More subordinate clauses (Dave's weekly update #562)

Hi, Everybody!

Like it says on the Logo:
The little bit on the bottom there...

It's Friday, so that means:
Dave's Weekly Update:

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A Moment of Cerebus runs Saturday through Friday.

The Week in AMOC:
  • Saturday: What is Dave's NEW Cerebus Story in the LEGENDS OF INDIE COMICS: WORDS ONLY Kickstarter?
  • Sunday: The end of Cerebus #2.
  • MondayThe Monday Report, and sometimes ya just gotta phone it in...
  • Tuesday: Jen lets us know where we are with the Strange Death of Alex Raymond GoFundMe. 2 more pages unlocked! $198 until page 103 unlocks. More Cerebus "rarities" being raffled.
  • Wednesday: Hobbs shares the AI Satan. If your Metal Band needs a cover...
  • Thursday: Margaret continues looking at pages from the first Notebook AKA Albatross 1, YOU can get your very own BETTER-THAN-MARGARET'S-POSTS-O.-M.-G.-YOU-GUYS-SERIOUSLY copy. See here. And she's gotta be nearing the end, right? Right?
  • Friday: that's this post. You're reading the Friday post right now. This is STILL like that bit in Spaceballs. (Should I link to LAST WEEK'S Update in these things?)
Okay, so that was the past week in AMOC. You're welcome.

Rigamarole:
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October 25-28.*
*Sale dates are not final and therefore subject to change.
_______________
The Cerebus Humble Bundle is over, you can STILL get all 16 volumes for $99CANADIAN at CerebusDownloads.com (More if you want the Remastered Cerebus Guide to Self-Publishing...)
_______________
Heritage has slapped copies of #1 and #2.
_______________
The Help Out Bill Messner-Loebs Go Fund Me, or buy Rodney Schroeter's book with proceeds going to Bill. 
_______________
The Last Day Without nothing.
   "      "     "        "  Dave's signature.
   "      "     "        "  an Old Cerebus Remarque
   "      "     "     Auction catalog for the Panoramic Remarques
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Oliver' Simonsen's Cerebus movie: The Absurd, Surreal, Metaphysical, and Fractured Destiny of Cerebus the Aardvark it's currently available on "Plex", "Xumo", "Vimeo On Demand", "Tubi". If you're in Brazil..."Mometu", "Nuclear Home Video".
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Next Time: Dave sent stuff, there's another couple of thousand pages from Cerebus, maybe rando Aardvarks from the internet...

Thursday 24 October 2024

Notebook One: Cerebus #27 Part One

A few years ago I scanned all of Dave Sim's notebooks. He had filled 36 notebooks during the years he created the monthly Cerebus series, covering issues #20 to 300, plus the other side items -- like the Epic stories, posters and prints, convention speeches etc. A total of 3,281 notebook pages detailing his creative process. I never really got the time to study the notebooks when I had them. Just did a quick look, scanned them in and sent them back to Dave as soon as possible. So this regular column is a chance for me to look through those scans and highlight some of the more interesting pages.

Maybe instead of rewriting this opener every week, I’ll be a bit more efficient with my use of time and have this standard opening . . .though Boss Man saying I'm giving the notebook away for free, I see it as a way of advertising all the good stuff in the notebook, and wouldn't it be easier to have a hard copy to flip through and read at your own leisure? 

Have you got your copy of Albatross One? That is Dave Sim’s name for his first notebook used in the creation of Cerebus. If you want a copy of the notebook – and trust me, as someone who has held the actual Albatross One, it is a pretty close duplicate and looks great – you can check out this post right here. Well not this post. The one at this link. Go check it out, this post will still be here.

Please buy one so boss man stops yelling at me for "giving the store away for free". Perhaps if he sells one or two or all that he has left, he'll finally give me some PTO. Wait, why am I pushing this, boss man is on vacation. . .I should just take off. . .

And if you don’t want to buy one, you can wait as I release a couple of pages a week and check them out using the Notebook One tag. But trust me, the notebook is much much nicer then my silly little posts.

Okay, now that is done, on with this week’s Notebook One post.

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We’ve been looking at Dave Sim’s first Cerebus notebook for so long I’ve forgotten about . . .well, I can’t even remember. I do remember – because I went back and looked at the post – that last week we saw bits and pieces of material for Cerebus #26, #27, the first look at the High Society logo, and some stuff for the back up story in Swords of Cerebus #2. And those were just pages #148 – 150. What will we see on the next page, page #151? Something similar. . .

Notebook #1, page 151

There is text at the top which Dave says is “sample dialogue for ‘The Morning After’ before it became a completely silent (except for the sound effects) strip”. And the dialogue:

Clerk: Most unusual. Short grey chap just came in and brought a half-foot of fox fur. . .

Boss: What’s unusual about that?

Clerk: He rolled it up, stuck it in his mouth, chewed on it for a few seconds and spit it out.

Under all that text is a logo for Black Zeppelin, which is a Gene Day comic, and pretty close to the final logo.

Up next would be page #152, but, we’ve already looked at it, though I mistakenly called it page #151, in Out of The Depths.

So the next page up is page 153:

Notebook #1, page 153

Ahh, it looks like we are neck deep in Cerebus #27 material, and also some notes on Cerebus #28 and #29 at the top of the page. For the Cerebus #27 material, there is a sketch of a fancy cup and I’m guessing that the text “the cup of two roses” is referring to that cup. However, Dave said in the AV version of High Society: “’The Albatross’ is originally called “the Cup of Two Roses” and Cerebus asked for it specifically.” 

Dave continues on the Cerebus #27 material on this page “Instead, I had him sign the ransom note from ‘The Eye in the Pyramid’, the ‘hidden name’ of the Kevillists, which led the cash-poor Iestans to use “The Albatross” to pay the ransom, assuming the Kevillists would be more happy with the substitution. Not realizing that it was Cerebus who had no idea what the “damn duck statue” was.” 

The note on the side of the page under the cup had me chuckling: “has to learn to say “I” instead of Cerebus.

The next page of the notebook is Dave plotting out page five of Cerebus #26:

Notebook #1, page 154

It doesn’t match up to page five in the finished Cerebus #27, but the plot point of a letter being written is part of the finished issue. Though Cerebus addresses it to the attention of the secretary of the treasury (city-state of Iest).

Dave had this to say about page 154: “Still trying to work it as if Cerebus knew what the ‘duck statue’ was instead of just using ‘The Eye in the Pyramid’ because he had a general idea that they were a Palnan revolutionary group.